June 2018 Vol. III No. VI
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From the Mad Mind
of Anthony Watkins
Experimental Poetry, in fact poetry in general as a concept, tends to escape me. Now, don’t get me wrong, I tend to write at least a poem every other day, and sometimes I will write several in a day, but the whole thing about “is this poetry?” and “why is this a poem?” eludes me.
Yet, I am forever curious about form, about concepts, about experiments. I started out over 50 years ago, writing down what I saw, or sometimes writing down what I thought, which I found to be a lot more ‘squishy’ than painting a picture of a bird on a tree or a cow near a red barn in a field full of bitterweed.
While I have mastered no form and am not sure how one would know they had mastered any part of poetry, I love making things. The other day I was thinking about how one needs to do something worthwhile with their life. For some less fortunate people, the very act of survival is a grand accomplishment, but for those of us who have lived a relatively easy, entitled life, survival is almost a given. For us, we must build a house, a corporation, a movement, a philosophy, or something.
I looked around at my life and thought: What have I built? I am 58, and I have done nothing (or nearly nothing, given the great advantages life has offered me). Then it occurred to me, I have built a machine. That machine is poetry, my poetry, as, of course, I have not built poetry itself. I wrote a poem about this, but it got me thinking about the concept of poetry as a machine. About mass production, uniformity, interchangeability, about building blocks. No one builds a house or an automobile or even a computer. People build components, then other people assemble these components.
Not to take it too far at the moment, but that is its own separate thought: if “Blocking” ever became a thing, some poets might take blocks from other poets and assemble them into new poems!
Back to my main point for today. My thinking led me to create the following system:
The Block
This is a “new” poetry concept I recently “invented”?
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Four lines, four words per line, and each construction block is to be a complete unit but they can be stacked to build a bigger something. The quotation marks are because I have no way of knowing who has already created what ideas. This one seems so simple and basic, it is hard to believe I am the first person to think of it. If you know of this form/concept having originated elsewhere, please let me know!
As a form, I am leaning toward the haiku tradition of not naming the poem, though that goes against all MY conventions.
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I think the idea in haiku is that it is such a short poem, one both accesses the meaning with immediacy, and a title does one of two things, it overwhelms the 17-syllable verse, or it allows a sort of cheating by extending the verse by a few pre-poem syllables.
With a single block, I think these all apply, and as the concept is, even if you stack them, they are all, each one an independent unit of 16 words, so the case still remains. for now, and as long as I am the only one writing them, I can make the rules, so I say “block” poems do not have titles.
I am very interested in what you, as a reader of poetry, as a writer of poetry, especially if you write haiku, formal, or short poems, think of this concept. I would love to hear from you, but less so about whether MY Blocks are good poems. What I am most interested is in seeing if you, the reader will send us some of your “Blocks”. If you do, note in the subject line blocks experimental, and we will publish them on the experimental page (hint: at least for now, say the summer of 2018, this is a great way to get your work published in Better Than Starbucks!)
The following are some of my attempts at the concept:
I
Mrs Payne’s desk sees
thirty-two children’s faces
staring back in amazement
not seeing the desk.
II
Grass soggy on ankles
Like thick wet hair
Releases sweat and dirt
From leather and denim.
Both pants and boots
Not clean but cleanish
Enough for field work
Sunrise brings drying heat.
The wood on the plow
is rougher than me
as I push it
against dry rocky soil.
My daddy would use
a mule for this
but I fear beasts
big, strong and dumb.
Once had a farmer
tell me mules aren’t
dumb, in fact they
are smart and stubborn.
III
The roar deadened air
surrounds muscled line workers
ear muffs and eyeglasses
and gloves against metal.
Nuts, bolts, and shavings
broken bits and tools
fall to a floor
constantly swept and vacuumed.
Union made, at speed,
ten thousand times, more—
repeated all three shifts
to feed a market.
IV
The crusher claw lifts
the Corvair, rusted, motorless
glass showers with rubber,
another cube is made.
V
Under the leafless pecans
the crow gun fires
frightening no one, not
even pecan eating crows.
The echo of rifles
as farmers stand, shoot
real bullets, killing birds,
ricochets through my mind.
Clear cold blue skies
cover the dead crows
more like a sail
than a comforting blanket.
One of my fellow ModPo South members, Arif Dalvi, tried his hand at a couple. I like them, I hope you do, too.
The pyre’s hot flames
Are dead. Whose face
Is it you seek
In the warm ashes.
And another filled with literary references:
Omar Khayyam wrote quatrains
Fitzgerald translated. Moving fingers
Stained much paper but
Poetry makes nothing happen.